Good use of backdrops behind the sub-headings. I don't like the red color or the all caps in the "games like it" section. The size and shape of the picture make it so it could be arranged differently, as in I feel like a wider picture would make more sense where you have it placed. Maybe capitalize "pitch document".
Your layout is aesthetically appealing, my only dilemma is under the last title there is less white space between the title and text then the others. Keep the white space consistent.
If you will have the headers that short in comparison to the text, it would be more pleasing to the eyes if you applied a slight fade effect to the end of them.
Good use of backdrops behind the sub-headings. I don't like the red color or the all caps in the "games like it" section. The size and shape of the picture make it so it could be arranged differently, as in I feel like a wider picture would make more sense where you have it placed. Maybe capitalize "pitch document".
ReplyDeleteThe bottom text seems a little tight. I like the form, maybe just restructure it to look even.
ReplyDeleteVery nice style and color scheme. Bottom text looks a bit cramped. Image looks good and is well placed so it catches the eye.
ReplyDeleteThe structure is good, just extend the headers to mirror the text length, or vice versa.
ReplyDeleteYour layout is aesthetically appealing, my only dilemma is under the last title there is less white space between the title and text then the others. Keep the white space consistent.
ReplyDeleteIf you will have the headers that short in comparison to the text, it would be more pleasing to the eyes if you applied a slight fade effect to the end of them.
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