Tuesday, February 11, 2014

Game Pitch Hide and Seek





John - How is basketball like ping pong?
Brian- Maybe add more to the page?
Olivia-Add some images?

6 comments:

  1. Check some spelling and grammar errors. Add some "fluff" to make it more intriguing.

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    1. Ah thank you for the helpful comment, I will add some fluff to make the pitch look more appealing

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    2. Ah thank you for the helpful comment, I will add some fluff to make the pitch look more appealing

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  2. Generic layout, maybe add some images, play around with the layout.
    Make it more aesthetically appealing.

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    1. Thank you for the comment, I will be certain to change up the aesthetics and add some images

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  3. Make sure you proofread prior to posting. Add some more details about the game.

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